woohoo flail stile combat!!!
Did he throw that thing, or kick it? either way what a hit!!
Pretty sure that was a kick? See the.. action lines?… from the foot? :D
Hmm.. yeah, this page was a tad confusing for me, especially from the first panel to the next. Did he jump off or get thrown?
Mao got thrown 2 pages ago. In panel 2 here, he gets back up after being punched into a tree. Panel 1 is Nora, still trying to pull off the big guys mask, then she jumps off in the last panel when Mao kicked the pillar at him. Does Nora look too much like Mao?
Wow, that’s some epic fail on my part ^^; I think I read too fast. Sorry about that! *re-reads*
At first glance, but then you notice the pony tail and earrings…
Thats not a mask is it?
On the bad guy, thats not a mask….right?
I dont want to ruin anything. But these guys are into dark mystic arts. So when they are born, a bone mask is fused to their heads. As they grow, their own bones assimilate into this “mask”, and start to grow together. And thats part of what shapes their head like that. Nora doesnt know that though, she just thinks its a mask.
That was a nice hit! The kick-throwing move was kinda confusing because of his pose but pretty nice! :D The speedlines look awesome!
What exactly is going on in the background of panel 3? It looks like the big guy is rearing back after Nora kicked him in the face, sideways to Mao. In panel 5, though, the guy’s head is knocked back by the pillar and Nora has launched back as if she were just standing on his head like she was in the first panel. I can follow what’s going on, but not all of the action makes perfect sense.
And to buffer criticism with compliment: despite the occasional awkward positioning, this is still one of the better-looking webcomics I’ve seen. Fantastic style, and excellent use of detail (Or lack thereof, depending on the frame)! It does a wonderful job of drawing focus to thematically important elements.
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